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A Sonnet [Aug. 4th, 2005|04:45 pm]
Hippies with Frisbees

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[easternstar]
This is something that I wrote the first week of YPI this year, and I thought that it was worth sharing. It's a sonnet. For those of you that think sonnets are boring...think again. It is the first and only sonnet I have written, in proper rhyme scheme and iambic pentameter.

A sky as fair as any sky can be
with clouds and rockets shining up above
A maiden lived and pined to see the sea
(the eyes need not to fall on one to love)
For, then, this maiden, she lived in the sky
and never traveled down to visit earth
Her father had forbade her down to fly
and locked her in a cloudhold since her birth
Yet, even so, she longed to see the day
to walk among the people who were there
All night, then, she would sit in bed and pray
until one night a prince appeared so fair
And they escaped to life that's more complex
and then he said that he just wanted sex
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[User Picture]From: gale583
2005-08-04 09:29 pm (UTC)
beautiful ^_^ and the ending is great XD lol
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[User Picture]From: brenavae
2005-08-04 09:53 pm (UTC)
:)
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From: zilly2
2005-08-04 10:26 pm (UTC)
helena martin, will you marry me?
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[User Picture]From: easternstar
2005-08-04 11:55 pm (UTC)
Okay, sure!
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From: neutralmilk1945
2005-08-05 02:14 am (UTC)
in mv, we were trying to match you guys up with men... but now that you mention it, this makes perfect sense!
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From: zilly2
2005-08-07 08:43 pm (UTC)
well, as wyatt says: i am almost a man.. or at least i should be a boy.. haha
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